Writing short films are a great calling card for a writer. Short films aren’t a lesser form of cinematic storytelling. In fact writing them requires the exact same skills as writing a feature length script – though on a smaller scale. Although TV broadcast opportunities may be limited, there are more and more outlets for these opportunities. I recently read on IndieWire:
Shorts used to be this artsy thing. But now there really is this explosion in filmmaking. With all this new technology, shorts films have a lot more interest among regular people, because so many people are making them and putting them on the web. Suddenly, we’re not explaining short films to people. Everybody’s seen one.
Many of the best writers and directors started out with shorts. Do you know that Sacha Gervasi, the writer of “The Terminal”, found his U.S agent, and then a lucrative writing gig with Dreamworks based on the strength of an extraordinary short film he wrote? It’s a rarity but it happens. Here’s some more examples. In any case, it’s an excellent way to develop your craft and flex your writing muscles and it is much less daunting than penning a first feature if you haven’t much writing experience.
There are 7 rules you should remember when writing a short film:
1. The Shorter the Better
A short film can be anything from fifteen seconds to forty five minutes in length. Make your short film script as short as possible because the shorter the short, the less costly it will be to produce. Of course, digital technology frees up filmmakers, yet time still costs money, so does feeding a hungry crew. If you shoot too fast your short film might end up looking amateurish. It has to be cheap but shouldn’t LOOK cheap! Plus, if you want to get your short into a festival, then keep it to no more than ten minutes, which is usually 7-8 pages maximum. Why? Because if your short film is longer, it will eat up a longer slot and festivals love to play as many shorts as possible! You can also create real emotion in just a few minutes.
Look at Sebastian’s Voodoo. It’s a 4 minute animated short about a Voodoo doll who must pierce his own heart to save his friend from being impaled and it is absolutely heartbreaking.
Sebastian’s Voodoo from Joaquin Baldwin on Vimeo.
2. Keep the Practicalities of Writing in Mind
The great thing about writing short films is that they can be anything since you don!’ have studio execs on your tail. However, don’t discard the practicalities of writing your script. I have read scripts with pages of chase-action scenes and car crashes, and many writers seem not to realize how time consuming it would be to actually shoot. In fact, see the writing of a short as an opportunity to become more aware of what each line you put down on paper implies and costs. Visions of white horses galloping in the moonlight certainly look amazing in your mind but are you sure you’re good friends with a wrangler and/or a CGI specialist? If you only have access to modest resources, think small.
Apricot is a good example of short film that could have been done on a low budget (it shows such impeccable production value I doubt it was actually done on the cheap) because it deals with two people sitting at a table at a cafe yet manages to show a wide range of emotion. Along the same lines, the Asian short film Just a Love Story takes place almost entirely in an elevator. Write for locations that are interesting yet practical, think of access and control, and avoid remote locations requiring driving for miles.
Just a love story from IF Chen on Vimeo.
3. Make It Visual
“Film is a visual medium”. “Show, don’t tell.” Those are the golden rules of screenwriting the gurus keep telling us. Yet it’s astonishing to see how talky most scripts are. Film is about telling stories in pictures, which is the most economical way of telling a story – and when you write short films, economy is everything. Create visual backstories for your characters. Externalize through visual images their temperament, their profession, their status, etc.
In the Lunch Date the posh lady polishes her fork before using it. What does it tell you about her? Note the economy of dialogue in the short film, a short film that went on to win an Academy Award for best live action short film.
4. Find Single Moments
The best short films are often a single moment that is played out, but one that has a story at its heart. What do I mean by story? I mean a conflict that has to be resolved, where there’s a dilemma at stake and a choice that the protagonist has to make. Strive to add a deadline, or ticking clock. It is not necessary but it will add some tension to your short film. The short On Time is a good example of a short film that meets all these conditions. It tells the story of a heart-broken young man can peek into the future and must act on it on the spot.
On Time from Ted Chung on Vimeo.
5. Tell a Story
You should always try to tell a compelling story. Beware of ideas that are concept-driven or just aim at breaking all the rules for the sake of breaking rules. Short films are a great opportunity to push the boundaries of what cinematic storytelling can do, yet they must still engage your audience emotionally. As a rule of thumb, unless it is extremely brief a short film should have a hero with a goal and an obstacle/antagonist in the way. Watch I love Sarah Jane. It shows a bunch of teenagers in a ghost town where adults have turned into zombies, yet at the core it is a love story about a young boy who can’t reach through to the older girl he loves.
I Love Sarah Jane from Qoob TV on Vimeo.
6. Engage the Reader
Since you have so little time to make an impression the impact of page one is crucial, just as it is crucial to hook the reader in the first 10 pages of a feature length script. What is the world of the film? Do we root for the main character? Does the world and story of the film feel authentic? The ending is also essential as it’s rare to truly feel moved at the end of a short, so work towards a meaningful, satisfying ending.
7. Beware of Cliches when Writing Short Films
There are many clichés in short films, and much navel gazing. How come everybody feels the need to write about hit men for hire, heists, people seeing themselves die, children representing innocence, incestuous relationships, etc? Avoid stereotypes unless you have a fresh slant on them. That’s what The Descendent does. In this short film a couple of bewildered hit men actually have to kill a seemingly cute little boy and one of them gets cold feet until he realizes that the child is a supernatural being who terrifies his mother. Write what you’re familiar with and what resonates with you rather than writing something you borrowed from other films. Don’t shy away from small stories, short formats are the perfect vehicle for them and you won’t often get the opportunity to tell small stories as a professional writer.
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Here’s some more handy idea generation tips for writing short films.
Last but not least, watch as many short films as possible. There is no replacement for knowing what is out there, and knowing what you as an audience (as well as a writer) think and feel about it. And keep writing short films.
About Stéphanie Joalland
Originally from France, Stéphanie holds a Masters in Business from Audencia Nantes. She began her career in story development at TF1 International and Canal Plus, worked as a story editor on TF1 animated series such as Emmy-nominated Pet Aliens, wrote live-action TV scripts, created a Sci-Fi animated series for Luc Besson’s Europa Corp for Canal Plus: Valerian & Laureline based on the comics.
After directing short films in France she moved to Los Angeles to study filmmaking at UCLA, graduated in 2008 then set up a UK-based production company Frenzy Films with fellow UCLA alumnus Sean McConville. In 2014 she wrote, directed and produced her first feature The Quiet Hour starring Dakota Blue Richards and Karl Davies which premiered at Galway Film Fleadh, was nominated for Best British Film at Raindance, Best International Film at Sofia Film Festival, won Best Feature at Kansas City Filmfest, showcased at Newport Beach, premiered on Sky Cinema in the UK, and sold to multiple territories including the U.S.
She's currently pre-producing Sean McConville’s upcoming thriller The Last Moon to be filmed spring 2018 while also developing her sophomore film, Ice, a contained science-driven sci-f thriller.
Stéphanie’s an alumna of Berlinale Talents and IFP Emerging Narrative in NYC. She works as an advisor and mentor on the Raindance MA Film Program in association with Staffordshire University in England.
Contact info: stephanie.joalland@raindance.co.uk
Good article. One of the things I always tell people who come to me to shoot a short is that it's not part of a bigger story – it has to BE the story. This is especially a fault of people who want to raise money for a feature by shooting a compressed version of the story, or, worse, what amounts to just a scene. Not only does it almost never work to see the feature, but usually leaves the audience wanting more.
Great tips/rules!
Kean Fowler you may like this.
You're missing the link to The Descendant in #7. Great article!
Thank you for the article, Stephanie! I was just curious about the artist of the accompanying photo. Do you know whose work it is? I love it!
a really good and useful article, especially for beginners movie makers. thank you!
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That was amazing..! hey guys, i'm a student and i don't know anythng about film making and short films..but recently me and my friend were thinkng to write a script for a short film taking our own real life stories to reel life story.. 🙂
Liked them all, except one because the James Bond one isn't available 🙂
Hi, here's a trailer for a tv-drama that we made, on a zero budget.
The trailer was made as a short film, since we didn't have the funding to make a full pilot episode. Feel free to have a look, and comment if you like it.
About the Lunch Date- uhm, no dialogue? You mean except for the talking that occurs? Also, while I actually loved this short, all I could think about how she polishes her fork is the fact that she first wipes the table with the same napkin. Ew. Incredible ending though!
great……….so helpful for me…thanks
What was the short film by Sacha Gervasi?
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Really good for Writers.
Thank, I'll keep it up
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Thank you for posting these guidelines and ideas to help perfect my writing skills!
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Thank you. I appreciate you.
Great Article!Keep up the good work!
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Very inspiring and constructive as well!
I appreciate !! each and every point is useful ! very good post !! Thank you for the post .
This will help me in a lot more way to start writing now. The points mentioned and the films as an example for the points, makes it easy to understand them. I appreciate your effort to reach this film educational article on an international platform .Thanks a ton
why ? I'm trying for writing the script "DESH BHAGTI". pls tell me how can I add the comedy ?
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this is sooooo helpful cant wait to write my second draft for my short film .
this is sooooo helpful cant wait to write my second draft for my short film .
Cliched rules. Nothing new here. Move on.
thnx….helpful
Loved and being educated the essence and passion to make a film…..I have just now seen all the short movies you mentioned …….All are great …….What most made me think and functional was Lunch Date ……..It made me think……And i was not getting entertained but in fact it makes me think about inculcating life with acceptance , mercy, givings ,sociality , congeniality , respect ,patience , forgiving, sportiveness, solidarity ………It’s very difficult to put such complex gestures in a short film without dialogue …….You don’t see a film ……But the subject of attitude in humanity ……….Your article had given me to look films in new dimension……Wonderful article.
Excellent..could pick out the exact tips I was looking for. Looking forward to implementing them in my first one. Although I plan on doing a non-English short, I’m sure these are very handy.
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