In the run-up to the awards season, everyone seems to be looking for clues to what makes a movie, or movie screenplays award-worthy.

There are some strikingly similar elements present in excellent screenplays such as Oscar and/or BIFA nominated scripts like The King's Speech and 2008's Slumdog Millionaire.

Here are some of the similarities, highlighted for educational purposes:

1. Single Motive Line

The most common mistake a screenwriter can make is to break or fracture the storyline.

For example, if you have ever told someone you were going to read a specific book title on filmmaking, they would expect you to update them daily on what you had learned. They would keep wondering "What is it like?" "Is it good?" and so on.

But if you told them after you had read the first chapter that you had decided to start studying figure skating instead, they would scratch their head. You would lose them at this point.

Tell them however, that you have decided to become a animator instead of  filmmaker and they would accept this as a career change, because your basic motive has not changed. It has simply bent.

 2. Heroes Have A Second Problem To Solve

In your bog-standard Hollywood movie, the cliche is of the action hero shot in the chest, the bullet stopped by an object in their chest pocket. Usually this is a copy of the Bible, or a picture of the girl they left behind.

This is the way Hollywood tries to tack on a second problem to solve - in this case an inner problem: religion or relationships.

Make one outer problem obvious and visible. Make the second one an inner problem, one that the main character may not even know that he or she has at the start of the story,

Doing this will make your movie zing.

3. Suspense of Disbelief

Great movies set up a series of circumstances that when added together become fantastical or extreme to the point where our average daily life becomes pale in consideration.

Great movies successfully walk us through each stage of these increasingly fantastic constructions and make us believe that they are real, when in fact they are far from real.

4. Strong Openings Means Strong Screenplays

Set the time and pace, and sum up the story through a clear and strong statement of theme.

The opening page of an action movie might have three or four short scenes, but a romantic comedy might have an opening scene lasting several pages.

Theme is what the story is really about, and is generally expressed through dialogue on the third or fourth page. For example, on page 3 of Chinatown, Jack Nicholson says: "You need to be a rich sonabitch to kill someone in this town and get away with it." This perfectly expressed what Chinatown was really about.

5. Play With Structure

Structure is probably the most misleading and unhelpful screenwriting term invented. A story's structure is based on the way your character's goals unfold.

Stories may in fact have a single theme as in (1) above, but clever and smart story-telling will throw a curve ball and lead the main character onto another goal temporarily. Not every film needs the paint-by-number structure ideas proclaimed by leading so-called story gurus.

6. Ambition

Great movies are ambitious in their scope and ideas. Great movies try and connect the writer's idea to the member of the audience watching the film, and teach them something they can use for their own life. They may not always totally succeed, but an audience will always allow a movie faults if the ambition is there for everyone to see.

7. Choose Your World

Screenwriters have the choice of two worlds: the one we, the audience, know or the one we don't know. Great movies take us into one of these two worlds and either show us something about the world we know (that we didn't know before) or, take us into a world we do not know and show us something that we can use in our own lives to become better people.

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8. Genre

Great movies are based on a blend of genres. All stories are blends of genres. The two most popular and commercial successful genre blends today are action/adventure and romantic/comedy. Genre has always been with us, be it in ancient Greek myths, Shakespearean stage plays or in modern straight-to-video movies.

Study films of the type you would like to write or make and see how past masters of these movies unfold their stories.

9. The World We Live In

As a storyteller and filmmaker you get to create your own version of the world - a world that is populated by movie people doing movie things in movie time. Great movies create worlds that are full of sparkling details and characters in which the writer and filmmaker show their own moral view of life, along with a view of how details impact and affect the way people live.

10. Have Something To Say

A movie with a great message is a great movie. See if your movie or screenplay can relate to a theme that is larger or more universal than the story you are telling.

Fade Out:

We are entering a whole new era of filmmaking and storytelling. Everyone is making up the rules as we go along. You can be part of this new frontier.  Remember that quitters never win and winners never quit.

Now, why are you reading this when you should be out making or writing your next movie?

Elliot Grove
Elliot Grove founded Raindance as a thought experiment: Can you make a film with no money, no training and no experience, he asked? When people like his first intern Edgar Wright started making movies he started the Raindance Film Festival to celebrate their work in 1993, the British Independent Film Awards in 1998. Elliot has produced over 150 short films, and 5 feature films. He has written eight scripts, one of which is currently in pre-production. His first feature film, TABLE 5 (1997) was shot on 35mm and completed for a total of £278.38. He teaches writers and producers in the UK, Europe, Japan and America. In 2006 he produced the multiple-award winning The Living and the Dead.
In 2013 he relaunched the production arm: Raw Talent with the cult film director Ate de Jong. Their first venture was the psychological thriller Deadly Virtues: Love.Honour.Obey. finished late 2013.

Here you can watch the 2015 BIFA's from the red carpet to all the awards. Elliot's interview is at 1:27:00

He has written three books which have become industry standards: RAINDANCE WRITERS LAB 2nd Edition (Focal Press 2008), Raindance Producers' Lab: Lo-To-No Budget Filmmaking (Focal Press 2013) and 130 PROJECTS TO GET YOU INTO FILMMAKING (Barrons 2009). He was awarded a PhD in 2009 for services to film education. His first novel THE BANDIT QUEEN is scheduled for publication next year.

Elliot teaches several courses at Raindance including Lo To No Budget Filmmaking and Writer's Foundation Certificate.

The 24th Raindance Film Festival has now released it's 2016 festival trailer: a homage to Stephen Spielberg who celebrates his 70th birthday this year:

https://youtu.be/BRSlpe03-w4

Read articles by Elliot Grove.

12 thoughts on “10 Common Elements Of Award Winning Screenplays

  1. Good points. One note though: 3. should be "suspension of disbelief". The term refers to the idea that the audience suspends skepticism (or disbelief) in a story's more implausible elements if the story is compelling and well told.

  2. Suspension of disbelief is the audience's job. If the story of the movie is well written and well played out then that job of suspending disbelief becomes effortless.

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